Upcoming Events

I knew I had quite a few things to do this summer but as I start actually working on them I realized I should share a few events with you guys in case you may be able to attend – or in case you know someone who is in the area who can attend. I also welcome any topics you think should be covered in any of these events.

  • May 23 2012 – Penning Poems and Forms – Workshop – Barnhill’s Books – Winston-Salem, NC – 6pm – This is the one I’m working on the most right now. My initial plans are to have a writing prompt as well as time to discuss some specific forms. The fee for this workshop is $10. I might decide to do a book raffle as well . . .
  • May 30 2012 – Finding Your Audience: Inspiring Students and Teachers Towards Publication – RCCC Summer Institute – 1-2:15pm – This is a free event that I am doing for the school, but I’ve been told that it can be open to the public if you register. There may be a small fee. It will be held in Kannapolis. I’m hoping to gear this event towards the participants so I’ll be looking for what type of resources the participants need for their publication dreams or those of their students. These events could be terrific for teachers who need their continuing education credits.
  • June 1 2012 – Thee Poets Reading – City Light Books – Sylva, NC – This event is listed as being from 6-7pm. I’m to read with Maureen Sherbondy and Ann Barnhill. I need to check this one because I don’t see it on their calendar yet.
  • June 2 2012 – NC Charlotte Metro-South Writer’s Event: 1, 2, 3 Submit! Hosting with Annie Maier about fiction, non-fiction, poetry etc that you think might be ready to submit but where? And how do you get started? 2-4pm Location TBA. Free but register with Annie at WordJunkiesPress(at)gmail.com. Speaking of the NCWN they are now taking registration for the Summer Writing Residency that is in Charlotte again this year. Oh that is tempting because I’d love to work with Morri Creech although it may conflict with my family trip . . .
  • June 10 2012 – Three Poets Reading – Park Road Books – Charlotte, NC – with Maureen Sherbondy and Anne Barnhill – 2pm – I dropped off copies of “Fat Girl” to them recently and  hope to bring “An Amateur Marriage” with me.
  • October 2013 – Poetry Hickory – well that is FAR in the future, but really one of my favorite places to read. Looking closer though I am really excited about going up to visit for June 12 because Robert Lee Brewer (yep that one!) and his wife will be reading and teaching a workshop!

Such a busy summer! I am trying to decide how much more to book for myself. In July I’ll be at the NC Writer’s Conference but I won’t be doing a reading or anything there. That is a different type of event, but I will have a night class in the fall that may continue to keep me from some events. I like the outlet, however, of getting a chance to read from time and especially to teach creative writing once in a while since that isn’t a part of my teaching day job :) I’m out there for hire! Or, as we well know, doing most of these for free.

Still considering teaching an online class this summer. Wonder if I’d have any takers for say $10? Hmmm

Getting Wiki with It

When I find something I love, admire etc I want to give it a shout out. Today, I want to tell you a little about my email conversation with Deb Moore about a Wiki she made to handle all of the composition classes she was teaching. This isn’t just a post that can apply to teachers. I think many of you will just find this plain interesting so join in our conversation because you can use wikis for so many different things!

First off you can visit the wiki yourself just to see how awesome it is.

Tell me a little bit about your teaching wiki.

I have four sections of Comp II this semester. At UCA, the Writing Department is part of the Communications Department instead of English, and so our Freshmen writing classes are Rhetoric and Composition-based, instead of literature-based. Teaching four sections of the same course makes the work of setting up and using the Wiki worth the while. Once the work of setting everything up is done, the semester goes much more smoothly.

The only hard copy documents I hand out are the syllabus, the outline, and the first assignment (the scavenger hunt) on the first day of class. Students turn in assignments on the Wiki. A lot of class exercises, we just do ON the Wiki (like the Super Bowl Commercial Critical Analysis), and then formal assignments are uploaded to their personal pages. We would be completely paperless, except that they have to bring in copies of their peer reviews (too much work for me to track them down on the Wiki), and a couple hard copies for in-class read around peer review. (I’m a big believer in peer review; they do a one-on-one, a writing center appointment, we do one day of whole-class, where I show a volunteer’s paper on the screen and we review together so I can model, and then we do a read-around. We devote a week to it.) When it’s time for grading, I download papers, make digital comments, and save them in my dropbox. Students who want the digital comments shoot me an email and I respond with a copy. You would be surprised at the number who don’t ask. Sigh

Unless you offer extra credit it seems students don’t jump at a chance for extra feedback or anything that seems like “work.” :)   How have the students responded to using the wiki?

The students really like it, and it makes things more interesting (and convenient) for me, too. Among other things, we’re finding that it makes it easier to change our minds at the spur of the moment and still keep everybody in the loop. That’s really the way I like to teach–I don’t always know what’s going to work best for a group of people until they are an actual group of people. It’s perfect for collaboration, too.

Last semester, when I taught Comp I, I decided at the last minute to have students prepare a digital portfolio, instead of a paper one (Lord, the stacks of papers I used to have at semester’s end!). One of the things that the Wiki lets me do is relax the assignment guidelines–letting students make their own decisions about the best way to communicate their point, which is something they weren’t always getting to do before. They converted their personal Wiki pages into portfolios. (I did tell them that they could do their reflective introductions using any medium they chose–that if they wanted to feed their dog peanut butter and record him talking about their process, or rap about it while tap dancing, they could. They were so excited by the prospect, yet none of them did. Too much work, I suspect.)

This semester in Comp II, during the Superbowl commercial critical analysis exercise that we did, the students in my 8am class and I picked the commercials and then all students in all sections were allowed to work on as many as they wanted. This gave me the idea to do the actual critical analysis essay collaboratively on the Wiki, opening it up so that students were working with students from other classes.

This was their chief complaint, in fact, when we were finished with the assignment and talking about lessons learned–that they wanted to work with the people in their own class. As I explained to them, though, in the world where they will work, it’s more likely that they will be working with people in different time zones than with those in the next cubicle.

How do you deal with contacting and grading your students? I rely on Blackboard (my schools’s primary choice for online courses and web enhanced face-to-face courses) and I can email them directly from that program. My students tend to be a bit technologically challenged.

I think Wikispaces is a good choice because I don’t want it to be too complicated for the students, who will (for the most part) have to learn to navigate it on their own. I model and troubleshoot a lot in the beginning of the semester, but mostly I encourage them to get in there and flop around until they figure it out. If they break it, I can always go in and restore it. In my experience, MOST freshmen taking Comp are technologically challenged–as far as they are concerned, the computer is just a Facebook machine. I try to teach them every trick I know–for instance, I require them to email their user name and password to themselves at their university email address.

I can email students (and them, me) from within the Wiki. Whatever email we used to sign up will send us a message that we have mail in the Wiki. I like that I can email the whole shebang, if I just want to remind them of a due date. I use Engrade for grading. There’s a link on the Wiki and students can check anytime to see how they are doing.

Another feature in Blacbkboard that I worry about not having if I went to an offsite source would be SafeAssign which checks for plagiarism. How do you handle that?

I don’t really do anything proactively about plagiarism, except that that is one of the reasons why I wanted students to post papers online. I read somewhere that students were less likely to plagiarize if their papers were more public (as opposed to just between me and the student). I have kind of funny ideas about plagiarism, anyway. I don’t like having to function as the plagiarism police. I focus on telling them everything they need to know to avoid it, including its causes. I respond appropriately when I discover plagiarism, but I don’t spend a lot of time looking for it. I would much rather catch them doing all the things they are doing right. But when it happens, accidental plagiarism cases get a grade of NG and the opportunity to correct the mistake. Overt plagiarism means an F in the course. I’ve only had to resort to the later a couple times.

Another good thing about them posting their papers online is that it lets them look at what their classmates are doing–instead of the one example in the text, they have 80 other papers to look at.

What, if anything, will you change next semester?

I don’t know that I will change much–most of the changes have happened as we go along. Evolving, I guess.

Using the Wiki lets me figure out what parts of what I’m doing are worthwhile (useful to either them or to me) and what really, really works. I discovered that some of what I was doing before the Wiki (learned in grad school while TAing) just doesn’t work/isn’t necessary/is outdated. Using it has really changed the way I teach. I think it lets me be more student-centered, which I like.

I would say that it has been a success. My first year writing director asked me to do a faculty development workshop on using the Wiki last semester, and I’m writing a paper about it. I get really excited when other faculty want to set one up to use in their classroom.

Thanks to Deb for telling us about her wiki and her class. I plan to borrow some of these terrific ideas for my fall classes and maybe – someday – when I can relaunch a discussion group for writers I know.

Make Friday Write

I’m at that point in the evening of grading when I ask myself: why did I assign that again? Seriously though I’ve seen some really great short information/research essays, but there are just so many of them. Thanks, students, for actually turning your work in!

So, for my break, I wanted to go ahead and get the Friday blog posted for everyone. I had a few poems this week so I actually have something to post although what I am going to post really has nothing to do with what my TV watching has seemed to be swirling around: Judaism. Why? I’m not really sure. Maybe because after watching this one documentary Constantine’s Sword I found myself wondering how much did I really know about Jewish history? My Netflix Queue also found me watching Hollywood’s historical take on the Holocaust via the documentary Imaginary Witness and then even the okay vampire movie Daybreakers made me think about how we treat “the other.”

The poem I tried to write as all these thoughts swarmed in my head didn’t quite work out (it involved the Vulcan hand sign – which has a Jewish origin – and the itchy roots of racism in the South), but I tried. And, I think I’ll continue to study more about Jewish history because I’m still interested and I still have questions. So, here is another poem I worked on this week. I knew someday my old job would start to speak through a poem. I just take a long time to process.

Contributory Negligence

NC Civil law states if you contribute even 1%
to your own injury you can not collect
from the other negligent party.

The adjuster knows the black and white of it,
but there is the grey of interpretation.
What does the adjuster do when the negligence

is obvious of the 23 year old who got into the car
with a drunk drive who then rolled the car
and died, leaving the passenger with facial

scars but nothing else. This is also called
assumption of risk. But the 23 yr old
was the daughter of the driver, wanting

to get her father home but she couldn’t drive
a stick shift and they were only two miles
from home and – well – he is – was her father.

His keys. His signature on checks for her
student loans. His draining face she sees
everytime the insurance company, the police,

the laywers looking for work call or when
she sees her younger brother – same jaw -
only in profile because he doesn’t turn

from his handle on the coffin as he lays it
for the funeral. She wears her hair back
so she can’t see the black curls – his black curls.

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Feel free to comment on my work in progress or to post your own in comments. I will remove my poem and any poems posted in comments one week from today.

Besides the informative writing my literature course was discussing early sonnets and my creative writing 2 students have started workshopping their writing. It was a busy, busy, week, but good.

On a side note I also finished an issue of The Kenyon Review. I somehow never actually read a print issue until now. It is as good as you’d think; definitely as good as you’d think.

Make Friday Write

Howdy folks! It is Friday; it is now Spring Break (as I finished my grading) and I finally have most of my energy back so BOOYA!

So not a bad week for publications, however, I did have several rejection slips as well and I still haven’t been writing a great deal. I am toying with some boot camp ideas for myself next week while I am on Spring Break. If I make that happen I’ll blog about it and it will include some writing prompts. No promises yet!

On the what I read, watch etc end

  • Recently finished Ellaraine Lockie’s collection Blue Ribbons at the County Fair which has an intriguing concept: compiling all prize winning poems into a collection. She says it is a chapbook but at 63 pages is it? Well it does have under 40 poems so . . . Always a hard debate.
  • I saw the movie Drive finally via Vudu and it was pretty good although I found the characters so intriguing I wanted more back store and a little less gore. Not that it is a horror movie but watch it and you’ll see what I mean.
  • I also watched Being Elmo on Netflix and I might just have to buy it. I love a good success story (with all the good and bad that can come with that) and how at the heart of almost everyone is the fact that someone believed in that person.
  • I did a whole post recently on Ewan Macgregor so I’ll keep this short - Long Way Down was just as fun to watch as “Long Way Round.” The book version which I found at the used bookstore yesterday!
  • I did spend over 3 hours on a PBS Mark Twain documentary on Netflix over the course of several days and that was well worth it. Love Mark Twain. I need to read some more of his work.
  • Gave up on Gnomeo and Juliet. Sorry everyone who loved it too much. I found it way corny.

The one poem that I did draft, and that did make it from the notebook to being typed is below but note this has not been separated into lines as of yet and is really only a second draft at best so it is quite unsure of itself right now. I still, as always, want to hear from you about it and I want to see what you guys are working on so post in comments and I’ll take down my work and any work in comments a week from today.

—and that poem is gone for revising!

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Hope everyone has a great weekend and if you are on break – STAY SAFE! I will spend part of my time catching up on British Literature reading and preparing for the research paper/informative essays that’ll be due from my comp students by the end of next week. This week we finished up basics of research and my lit class finished Chaucer. They get to discuss some sonnets next week before moving into “Othello.”

Oh and those Creative Writing 2 students get to write up what they thought of reading submissions for “Referential”. THAT should be interesting :)

Make Friday Write

We are having such strange weather in the south right now. No wonder I have been sick all week! Right now it is in the 70′s but it has started to pour down rain. Maybe you should read some of the Southern Women’s Review (pdf you have to download) in which I also have a poem? to get some more southern vibes.

Speaking of things to share. How about some additional essays? Here is a really terrific one over at The Rumpus that has a shout out to one of my favorite books A Wrinkle in Time. Or this essay in Hippocampus that I so wish had been part of the teaching philosophy I just had to write for an award I was nominated for.

I also want to mention Helen Losse’s newest chapbook which, when you purchase, will help those affected by the Joplin, MO tornadoes. I’ve had a chance to read and blurb the chapbook so I’d highly recommend picking up a copy or heck several for gifts. It is going to a great cause.

Hmm I had some other notes here I was going to mention about what I have seen on TV recently, but, ya know it must not have been that important if I can’t think of what it was right now . . .

I’m still in a rut on writing new poems. I’m still journaling and I submitted a set of poems this week (already rejected!) so I’m plugging away. How about you guys?  I have decided I will share a poem that was recently rejected to see what you guys think.
–I’ll go see what I can do with the poem now :)  

As always please feel free to share your work in progress, to ask questions, to share courteous conversation with others about my work and/or your work. My students were working on peer review this week (well the ones who came and the ones who were actually paying attention. It seemed there was a lot of spring fever and/or apathy in the air this week) and next week we move onto research.

And over in British Lit? Finished “Monty Python and the Holy Grail” and next up is Chaucer you saucy wenches :)

Make Friday Write

I’m in serious multi-task, must finish many things before the hour becomes to late mode because tomorrow I will be one of the featured poets at the first Couplet 2 Day Poetry Festival in Wilmington, NC! If you know people in that area, send them the schedule and send them our way! I may not make it to stay for the anthology release party – but I do have two poems in the anthology! – but I am going to try. I just know it is a 3.5 – 4 hour drive each way for me and I have a super bowl party to go to on Sunday at my in-laws home and they are HUGE Giants fans.

One thing I am working on is grading my composition classes assignment for this week. It was a three part:

  1. Try a pre-writing technique (several were in the book but they could be some such as freewriting, brainstorming, outlining, mapping etc) in response to Ken Macrorie’s quote” Good writing is formed partly through plan and partly through accident.”
  2. Take that pre-writing and try to write a response to the quote (if you freewrote revise your response)
  3. Write a paragraph about your writing process. Maybe think about why you chose the pre-writing technique you did or speak about what you are going to do next with your response

I have finished grading the in class analysis my British Lit class did of “Beowulf” and I’m catching up with my creative writing 2 online class. They are getting the experience of reading submissions to “Referential.” Don’t worry, if you submitted I get the final call on what stays and goes.

While I’m finishing up school work I am also trying to work on my to do list which included trying to get to this blog post and then digging into the printed copy I made of my potential third manuscript.

That manuscript is what I want to talk with you about for a minute. Instead of posting a poem since I really only have one in progress right now and it seems like it might be about ready to sub I’m going to ask you guys for some help as we think more about when we retire and/or keep working on poems.

I’m going tolink you to a document (and now it is unlinked!) filled with poems that I wrote, that were then published, but that I later found myself unsure of. If you want to scan through and then leave comments here (or I think you can actually leave comments on the document . . . this should be fun!) on ones you think should stay retired or ones you think maybe have some merit for revision I think that could be fun. Some of these poems are so old they were published when I was an undergraduate!

As always I want to hear what you guys are working on. Did you send work out? Have something to link or post in comments so we can chat about it? (As always I’ll take it down a week later).

Some fun notes at the bottom for your weekend:

  • A copy of my chapbook Fat Girl made it to Germany!
  • And here is a kickster opportunity I just had to give a little bit of money to. The filmmaker is someone I met on Twitter and she is such a warm person. If you don’t follow her you should!