Review: Spill

Goodreads doesn’t have the beautiful coverart for Malaika’s book but here is a link to another review where you can see it.
Spill
Spill by Malaika King Albrecht
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Malaika’s second collection of poems Spill (2011, Main Street Rag) is just as open and fearless as her first collection Lessons in Forgetting (2012, Main Street Rag).

Spill is separated into two sections: Tributaries and Rapids followed by Waterfall and Ocean. Not surprising, water appears throughout these poems from the devasting scene of baby mice drowning in a bucket to the swollen, dangerous rapids of mother daughter relationships and the quest (the journey down the river so to speak) of finding yourself.

There were quite a few poems in this collection that I stopped to read twice such as “Another Look at Meduse” where Malaika writes in the voice of Medusa, “Quick as cobras spit, / she said, The only stone’s / my own thick tongue.”

The only reason I have a 4 instead of 5 star review is that I found the last 10 poems or so didn’t quite resonate as much as the earlier work and I actually think “Ode to Weeds” may have made a stronger ending than the poem that was eventually chosen for the final poem in the collection. That is mostly the editor in me talking. It can be difficult, when working with a narrative arc such as this book has, to find the right poem to end on.

This collection, however, is still one I’d strongly recommend. Malaika is a wonderful poet whose poems seem so very simple on the surface but thei word play and connections once you read them again are just amazing.

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Review: Thinking Out Loud on Paper: The Student Daybook as a Tool to Foster Learning

This is a short review of a teaching book, but I think writers should think about using daybooks/journals no matter who they are!
Thinking Out Loud on Paper: The Student Daybook as a Tool to Foster Learning
Thinking Out Loud on Paper: The Student Daybook as a Tool to Foster Learning by Lilian Brannon
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Terrific resource from the UNC-Charlotte branch of the National Writing Project. I knew I wanted to start using daybooks after attending the summer institute and having the chance to use one myself. Daybooks can be used at any grade level (I teach at the community college level) and I look forward to trying many of the exerices, especially the multi-genre one on page 49.

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Review: Missing You, Metropolis

As I note in the review, I was torn about writing this review, but I decided to go with it because I wanted to see what kind of discussion it would start :)
Missing You, Metropolis
Missing You, Metropolis by Gary Jackson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

I had a hard time deciding if I was going to review this book because I love the concept, but I came away unsure about how I felt about the book as a whole.

The collection opens strong with a poem about comics, including a shout out to Auden. I also loved the voice in the poem “Stuart” but as women started to appear in the book things became a bit uncomfortable for me.

The women, even the super hero ones, come across merely as sex objects or at least that is how I felt reading about Mystique, Dazzler etc. I hoped that this was just the voice of early in the book as there is some narrative arch/chronology to the book, but I wasn’t sold by the end that the speaker had matured much further in his view of women. Although he gets closer with the tribue he plays in “Elegy to Gwen Stacey.”

That being said I like the violence/villian (black vs white on many levels) issues that are addressed such as in the well-written “Origin of Memory” where Jackson writes in Joker’s voice, “If only I could remember / the moment before I fell in / and cast the old life off – // why I’m incomplete, / the crack in every smile, / the black globe in every eye.” This poem has a nice flow and sense of closure which some of the other poems lack.

This is an interesting read, especially if you like poems that dip into pop culture as a way to speak to the world, but I do have a harder time recommending it, especially for female friends.

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Make Friday Write – in Awesome Style!

Ok – the amount of awesome I need to discuss is a bit daunting so I’m just going to dive in!

The photo I have included MAY be part of the cover design for my upcoming chapbook An Amateur Marriage which (for those who haven’t clicked through yet) is now on early pre-order at $12 from Finishing Line Press. I’ll be doing some additional mailings (snail and virtual) about this soon because it won’t be released until March but the pre-order time period (now until early January) determines the size of the press-run as well as how many contributor copies I receive. If you confirm you order a copy after reading this blog post, I will send you (or someone you designate) one of the last signature, limited edition copies of The Wait of Atom as a thank you.

Speaking of chapbooks, but Fat Girl was just reviewed in decomP. I LOVE decompP the magazine.

And now – not speaking of chapbooks, how about I had one poem publication to let you know about, but then (while checking my list) realized I had four others out there! So here are the links:

Then to speak not of my own poems how about the fantastic ones by Elizabeth Glixman up in Frigg where there are some equally amazing short stories by Erin Fitzgerald? See I told you there were layers and layers of awesome!

And now for the work in progress

–and the poem has a commute now!

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Feel free to discuss my poem below and/or to post your own works in progress (or link to them). All poems will be removed this time next week.

Hoping to squeeze in a few minutes before heading to a training class to work on some submission packets. Have you guys been sending work out? Working on new stuff? Doing any variation of NaNoWriMo or NovPad Challenge?

Or not reading as much (or writing as much) but storing up new stuff like watching Married in America 2. What is it to be married in this day and age?  Even us amateurly married for 13 years could use that as a writing prompt :)

Review: War Dances

War Dances
War Dances by Sherman Alexie
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I’ve had Sherman Alexie on my “to read” list (in a variety of genres) for a long time, but after reading the title piece in The Best American Non-Required Reading Anthology I knew I had to finally take the plunge.

I wasn’t disappointed.

Alexie writes charcters you will love to hate and/or at least you’ll find yourself thankful that they are not you (or at least I hope you aren’t the adultering frequent flyer as portrayed in one short piece).

I found myself wondering whether the prose and poems were more fiction than fact? Not that it really matters, but I was curious.

The prose pieces in this collection, to me, are what really sing. I want to use “Fearful Symmetry” in class someday and/or to at least point people toward it who feel they are suffering from writer’s block.

Of the poems included I had to make note of “Roman Catholic Haiku” which is quite long – ha! – because I have been playing around with haiku in class this week as a way to think about word choices.

Overall this is a really fun collection. Most of the pieces are short (and/or separated into short chunks) so it makes for a good book to travel around with you. A good – keep in the car read.

Enjoy!

-Now what to read next from Alexie?

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Review: The Wilder Life: My Adventures in the Lost World of Little House on the Prairie

The Wilder Life: My Adventures in the Lost World of Little House on the Prairie
The Wilder Life: My Adventures in the Lost World of Little House on the Prairie by Wendy McClure

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is one of those almost a 5 star review!

McClure’s writing style, initially, felt a little bit choppy for me. It seemed there were abrupt transitions in the first 20 pages or so, but once I fell in with her style of writing I had a hard time putting the book down.

Also, from a teacherly standpoint, I love her love of colons (the grammar kind).

I don’t think you have to be a fan of the Little House books (or TV show) to find this memoir appealing because it is that – a memoir. The book travels with Wendy (can I call her Wendy now) as she investigates the “real” sites where the Little House books took place.

I, of course, read the Little House books when I was a pre-teen, but I haven’t been back to read them. I don’t think I was quite involved enough (or with the show – although I wanted to be Melissa Gilbert the actress cause she was small and a brunette) that I’d want to track down the sites myself so this saves me from having to do that. In fact, this book had me wondering – is there anything I’ve read, watched, done that I find so enthralling that I’d have to go on this kind of quest?

One of my favorite reflective moments in the book happens towards the end when McClure writes, “Maybe the Little House books have always been a way to “unremember . . . To me unremembering is knowing that something once happened or existed by remembering the things around it or by putting something else in its place.”

Isn’t that what we writers, and avid readers do? Don’t we want to remember something that relates to ourselves or remember something that never happened to us so we can fit better into the world?

Well, that’s what I hope we do :)

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